FROM ANACARMEN ROLDAN.....It´s wrong that the title is " AMANECER" and the haiku includes the synonimous expression " APARECER UN NUEVO DÍA".... It has to be more difficult to find the equivalence between the title and the metaphor... Sorry it wasn´t SUNSET ...it was SUNRISE, as I said to you!!!!
"APARECER UN NUEVO DÍA"=SUNSET...... You must refer to the SUNSET indirectly....don´t define it as a dictionary would do it!!!!!!
ResponderEliminarThe former comment comes from Anacarmen!!!!
ResponderEliminarFROM ANACARMEN ROLDAN.....It´s wrong that the title is " AMANECER" and the haiku includes the synonimous expression " APARECER UN NUEVO DÍA".... It has to be more difficult to find the equivalence between the title and the metaphor... Sorry it wasn´t SUNSET ...it was SUNRISE, as I said to you!!!!
ResponderEliminarIsa me ha gustado mucho tu haiku :)
ResponderEliminares muy original!